6. Sequential explanations
6.1. Example
How Ice Changes from Solid to Liquid
Melting is a physical change in which a solid becomes a liquid. This explanation describes the sequence of events that occur when ice melts.
First, heat energy from the surroundings is absorbed by the ice. This increases the movement of particles in the solid. Next, as more heat is absorbed, the water molecules vibrate more quickly. They start to move out of their fixed positions in the solid structure. Then, the strong bonds holding the ice molecules in a rigid lattice weaken. The structure begins to collapse as the particles loosen. Finally, once the temperature reaches 0°C, the solid ice becomes liquid water. The molecules can now move freely, forming a liquid.
6.2. Stages and Phases in Systemic Functional Linguistics (SFL)
Stages
Each stage serves a distinct purpose.
The genre will not work properly if a compulsory stage is missing.
Stages structure the whole text.
Sequential Explanation: Title → General Statement → Explanation Sequence
Procedure: Goal → Materials → Steps
Information Report: General classification → Description
Phases
Phases are sub-moves that contribute to the purpose of the stage.
They help guide the reader step-by-step through the meaning.
Example: Phases within a Sequential Explanation
In the General Statement stage - Phenomenon Identification - Optional Definition or Classification
In the Explanation Sequence stage - Temporal Staging (e.g., “first”, “next”, “then”) - Description of Actions/Events - Cause and Effect - Final Outcome
6.3. Stages and Phases of a Sequential Explanation
Stage 1: Title
Phase: Topic Label
Names the topic or process.
Usually a short noun group.
Example: “How Evaporation Occurs”
Stage 2: General Statement
Phase 1: Phenomenon Identification
Introduces the phenomenon being explained.
States what it is in general terms.
Phase 2: Classification or Definition (optional)
May define the type of process.
May explain why the process is important.
Stage 3: Explanation Sequence
Phase 1: Temporal Staging
Uses time connectors such as: “first”, “next”, “then”, “after that”, “finally”.
Phase 2: Description of Actions or Events
Describes what happens in each step.
Uses material processes (e.g. “heats”, “vibrates”, “breaks”, “forms”).
Phase 3: Cause and Effect
Shows how each step leads to the next.
Connectors include: “because”, “therefore”, “as a result”.
Phase 4: Final Outcome
Describes the end state of the process.
Optional Stage: Concluding Statement
Phase: Summary or Significance
May restate the outcome.
May explain the importance of the process.
6.4. How Ice Changes from Solid to Liquid
Title
How Ice Changes from Solid to Liquid
General Statement
Explanation Sequence
Step 1: Heat Is Applied
First, heat energy from the surroundings is absorbed by the ice. This increases the movement of particles in the solid.
Step 2: Particles Begin to Vibrate Faster
Next, as more heat is absorbed, the water molecules vibrate more quickly. They start to move out of their fixed positions in the solid structure.
Step 3: Structure Breaks Down
Then, the strong bonds holding the ice molecules in a rigid lattice weaken. The structure begins to collapse as the particles loosen.
Step 4: Solid Turns into Liquid
Finally, once the temperature reaches 0°C, the solid ice becomes liquid water. The molecules can now move freely, forming a liquid.